Rendering:
week 6: al-Qaeda bomb plot on New York:
Suspect arrested over attempted attack on building near World Trade
Center site
The article, which was published on the 17th
of October, 2012 in
The Daily Mirror, discusses the situation about a 21-year-old Bangladeshi man –
Quari Mohammad Rezwanul Ahsan Nafis. He is a suspect who has been arrested over
attempted attack on building near World
Trade Center.
Giving
appraisal of the situation it’s necessary to point out that Nafis has
considered several targets for his attack, including a high-ranking government
official and the New Your Stock Exchange, but in the end decides to focus on
the Federal Bank in lower Manhattan,
according to the charges.
Analyzing the situation it’s necessary to emphasize
that, after parking the van, he went to the Millennium Hotel near the World Trade
Center, where he called
the mobile phone in the van. It didn’t explode and he was arrested by federal
agents.
Speaking of the situation, it’s necessary to
note that Nafis had an accomplice – an undercover FBI agent – who he met on the
internet and believed. It’s very unlikely that Nafis recorded a videotaped
statement in which he said that they wouldn’t stop until they attained victory.
The reporter, Damien Fletcher, gives no details
as to his own opinion. But personally I think, it’s good that there wasn’t bomb
in the van that day, but in could exist the other day. So, form my point of
view, FBI should keep an eye to the whole situation around terrorism of our
world to protect us – civilians.
Good!
ОтветитьУдалитьIt's necessary seems to be your favourite cliche!
Some of the cliches are out of place.
Slips:
... THE attempted attack on THE building near THE World Trade Center...
... Nafis considered and decided (Simple Past) ...
... there wasn't A bomb ...